Day by day
we sing our song
for future’s life
of love held long
Day by day
I yearn that soon
Our hands will touch
From moon to moon
Day by day
You cringe so tight
So I do soothe
With all my might
Yet, now and then
We mourn your pain
At loss for words
In silence’s domain
Now and then
I sigh and stare
Struck so speechless
From your despair
Now and then
You lose your will
To keep on going
In this life still
Still, day by day
We’ll push on past
These horrors of life
No matter how vast
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First attempt...go me! Remember, I don't mind any constructive criticism anyone my want to give
 There might be a moment where the flow breaks in syllables, though the change of syllables at the end was an attempt to make the ending seem more significant. Tell me what you think! That said, now I know what you might be thinking: "How is this at all philosophical, in the slightest?". Well, I figured I'd start everything off pertaining to the single factor that gave me the motivation to go ahead and do this, my girlfriend. I'm sure you've all seen some story like this before, so I wont bore you with the details  , however to me, I think it's fitting.Here's to you and me, Mimi ^_^ |
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But in all seriousness, that was pretty awesome. X3 thanks a lot, I liked it, and no it's not perfect (as far as syllables and all that other stuff), but that's what poetry is supposed to be >:E It does pertain to the situation rather well...
Thanks ^^ <3
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And yes...*strokes his chin* Now that I look it over, there are some points where I could have done better o.o. Ah well, practice makes perfect!
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